考研英语短文写作1996年作文试题和范文_新浪教育

考研英语短文写作1996年作文试题和范文

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　　Writing (15 points)

　　Directions:

　　A. Title: Good Heath

　　B. Time limit: 40 minutes

　　C. Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)

　　D. Your composition should be based on the Outline below and should startwith the given opening sentence:“The desire for good health is universal.”

　　E. Your composition should be written neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.

　　Outline:

　　1. Importance of good health

　　2. Ways to keep fit

　　3. My own practice

　　【范文一】得分15分

　　Good Health

　　The desire for good health is universal. Chairman Mao had ever said,“Good health is the fundation of the revolution.”If your health is in a good condition, you will have enough energy to deal with the strong competition in your everydaylife with a good mood. Now, with the increasing of the living standard, good health becomes more and more appreciated. Many advertisements give people some suggestion (eating some medicine or using exercising machine) to keep good health, but how can we keep fit in a natural way?

　　So many people wont be conscious of health until theyre ill. Why not do someexercises every day to make our body strong and prevent us from illness? I think its a natural and easy way. Dont stay up too late at nights. Living with regular rule is very important to your health. Besides, you must pay attention to thenutrition in your everyday food. As the medical verification, certain amounts of protein, vitamin, calcium is necessary to your good health.

　　As for me, keeping a good habit is important. Getting up early every day and doing morning exercises is not dispensable. If I feel very tired while studying, I will go out and do some walking or jogging. Well combining work with play is notonly good to your health but good to your study.

　　【范文二】得分14.5分

　　Good Health

　　In the past few years, there has been an increasing awareness of importance of good health. If you happen to be in one of the parks in the early morning, you willsee lots of people practicingtaijiquanand sword play, and others are running or dancing. And if you are stout and strong, you can go all out to overcome the obstacles that lie ahead of you. Health is foundation of our work.

　　Actually the key to good health is in every bodys own hands, though doctors canhelp in some way. Good habits, proper nutrition and adequate exercise play a part in keeping health, such as avoid smoking and getting up early in the morning.Mental health and psychological factor is equally important. As the old saying goes,“a sound mind is a sound body.”Just be active in your life and away from worries.

　　I believe that health is more important than wealth. So I always do some sports in the afternoon to relax myself after stressful study. I think health is the most important ingredient of your success.

　　【范文点评】

　　内容切题，包括提纲中的全部要点；文章通顺，语言流畅，句式变化多样；用词面较宽；虽然个别地方是中文意译的，但可以看出学生英语功底显然很好，表达能力强，语法无大错，文章长度符合要求。

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