下面是Andy针对12月13日雅思写作考题所写的观点及主体段落的布局，可供广大的考生们参考。

　　Some of those authorities on education (=education expert=educationalist ) point out that people who graduated from university can benefit society a lot than those who do not graduate from university. (先说明接受高等教育的学生比没接受高等教育的学生做出的贡献较多)Societal benefits from these graduates include: lower smoking rates, lower incarceration，more positive perceptions of personal health. (举例说明具体贡献)They also said that higher levels of education are correlated with higher levels of civic participation (such as volunteer work, voting, and blood donation). (再次强调接受高等教育的人会从事较多的公益活动) So, it can be clearly seen that students with high education are able to create more societal benefits than those without it.

　　However, others claim that sending a larger number of students to university will, in the long run, bring about a high rate of unemployment rather than create benefits for society. (先提出他人认为接受高等教育的人数多不会对社会有好处反而是导致高失业率的原因，接着透过转折关系把该观点否定掉)But according to a recent report by Global Human Resource Organization not only found that the high rate of unemployment in the university population is consistent with the fact that (值得模仿的句型)unemployment rates go up not mainly for sending a high percent of the youth to university but for globally financial alarms. (提出第一个例证说明另一个导致高失业率的原因是全球性的经济危机)It also showed that another reason why there is a high rate of unemployment is too few job vacancies (工作岗位=工作机会) to be offered (提出第二个例证说明导致高失业率的原因还有工作岗位太少). The report, therefore, argued that who should take the responsibility of solving the problem of unemployment. (借这个报导，提出问题，就可以引出末段，并在末段提出相应的解决办法)

　　作者简介：

　　安迪(ANDY，美籍)南京新航道学校雅思名师，美国 University of C.A. at Berkeley, MBA 。教授雅思、新托福等课程。深刻研究各类国外英语考试，对夺取高分有独特方法，拥有多年丰富的口语教学经验，历游世界多国，善于把西方生活理念以及文化注入口语教学过程中，课程信息量大，结构清晰。授课风格轻松活泼，富有激情，课堂互动性强，极具感染力。

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