杭州市:满分范文

　　满分文(一)

　　Mr Nunan,

　　Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain. In his opinion, the best ways are reading English newspapers and talking with friends. He also believes that sometimes seeing English films isn't a bad way.

　　I quite agree with him. However, I think, we can go surfing online, where we can find a lot of information in English to read. Besides, we can look for an e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to know something about his or her country. Finally, learning English grammar well is also a great help.

　　Liu Mei

　　点评：本文结构非常清楚，第一段阐述了Allen的观点，第二段则是叙述自己的观点。两段中间用“I quite agree with him.”连接起来，显得非常自然。同时作者在阐述自己和别人的观点的时候使用了不同的表达方式，比如 “in his opinion”, “he also believes”, “I think” 等，避免了重复，增加了语言的多样化。本文的衔接非常地成功，比如第二段 “however”, “besides”, “finally” 等连接词使文章显得结构非常地紧凑，读来一气呵成。

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