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天津市:满分范文http://www.sina.com.cn
2008年04月11日 18:36 新浪考试
满分文(一) “Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” was launched on April 29, 2007. The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony together first , and then we went to the playground to have one-hour sports activities , such as running , doing exercises and playing basketball . I felt very good after having some exercises. I think it is a good way to build up our body strength. Sports can also let brains have a rest so that our study will be more effective. To do physical exercises an hour a day will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep on doing it. I hope more and more people will join us in sports activities. 点评:作者根据的题目中的提示完成了这篇佳作。本文最大的特点就是要点清楚,表达通顺。很多人在根据提示完成文章时,常常把一条一条的提示写的很突兀,没有连续性,而本文的作者却成功地避免了这种问题,运用非常娴熟地语言表达功力把各个要点非常自然地串联起来。
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