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重庆市:满分范文http://www.sina.com.cn
2008年04月11日 18:36 新浪考试
满分文(一) Sports in Our School Sports in our school have changed a lot.Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week.and we have at least one hour to exercise every day. Students get so excited at these changes.More and more students take an active part in the ball games,running,and jumping on the playground. Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.What’s more? A healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life. 点评:本文要点非常齐全,三段话分别叙述了题目中要求的四个方面,层次清楚,段与段之间的连接也很自然。第一段主要讲我们学校的运动课和运动时间发生了很大的变化,第二段是讲同学都很积极地参加运动,第三段主要讲运动给校园生活带来的变化。本文最大的特点就是每一个的开头都是一个中心句,这样使得文章大意非常明了,结构也很清晰。
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