太原市:满分范文

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  满分文(一)

  Dear Editor,

  I don’t have much time to do sports now. Too much homework makes me feel very tired.

  In fact, I love sports, especially skateboarding. Whenever I think of my first skateboarding competition, I feel very excited. I can still remember the day when I was in Grade Seven, we had a competition in our school. Many people took part in it, but I was the winner. I skated fastest that day. I feel very proud.

  Doing sports can relax ourselves. But it’s a pity we can’t do that now. I think “Sunshine Sports” is necessary for us students. I hope I can play outside the classroom every day and enjoy sports!

  Yours,

  Li Jiankang

  点评:本文是一篇书信体,文章中的三段话分别回答了来信中的三个问题,要点清楚。在第二段中,作者详细地叙述了自己曾经参加过的滑板运动,语言真切自然,可见作者对这项运动的喜爱之情。第三段中作者抒发了自己的观点,感情真挚细腻。总而言之,本文是以作者的亲身体会谈了谈对运动的看法,可谓以情动人。

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英汉互译

好词

1.especially尤其是2.skateboarding溜冰板3.necessary必要的4.relax放松

好句

1. In fact, I love sports, especially skateboarding.
事实上,我喜欢运动,尤其是溜冰。
2.I hope I can play outside the classroom every day and enjoy sports! 我希望我能够在课堂之外多做运动,并享受运动带来的乐趣。

  

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