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太原市:满分范文http://www.sina.com.cn
2008年04月11日 18:36 新浪考试
满分文(一) Dear Editor, I don’t have much time to do sports now. Too much homework makes me feel very tired. In fact, I love sports, especially skateboarding. Whenever I think of my first skateboarding competition, I feel very excited. I can still remember the day when I was in Grade Seven, we had a competition in our school. Many people took part in it, but I was the winner. I skated fastest that day. I feel very proud. Doing sports can relax ourselves. But it’s a pity we can’t do that now. I think “Sunshine Sports” is necessary for us students. I hope I can play outside the classroom every day and enjoy sports! Yours, Li Jiankang 点评:本文是一篇书信体,文章中的三段话分别回答了来信中的三个问题,要点清楚。在第二段中,作者详细地叙述了自己曾经参加过的滑板运动,语言真切自然,可见作者对这项运动的喜爱之情。第三段中作者抒发了自己的观点,感情真挚细腻。总而言之,本文是以作者的亲身体会谈了谈对运动的看法,可谓以情动人。
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