昆明市：满分范文

　　满分文(一)

　　A Gift

　　I have received so many gifts on my birthdays. But I love the book named Beautiful English best. It was given to me by my mother last year. I like to read it in my spare time. From the book, I have learned that the world is full of love and beauty. I also know people should help each other, understand each other and love each other. I think I’ll grow up with the book because it is not only a book but also my mother’s deep love.

　　点评：作者开门见山地点出了自己最喜欢的礼物，然后详细地阐述了这份礼物的来源和为什么喜欢这份礼物的原因。最后作者表达了自己的希望。本文内容很完整，作者层层深入，娓娓道来，展现了一位中学生的叙事功底。在语言方面，本文长短句结合，增加了语言的多样化。

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