雅思写作十大“见官死”开头3-5

　　“见官死”开头之三：观点模糊 态度暧昧(喷血指数：☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

　　“见官死”开头之四：偏离主题 无轨电车(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)

　　I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

　　“见官死”开头之五：语法错误 惨不忍睹(喷血指数：☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)

　　About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

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