第五届全国创新英语作文大赛优胜作文选登(2)
Beat Them！You’ll Win
姓名 梁毅超 北京市中国人民大学附属中学 学校 高三11班级 准考证号 355
As many say, failure is the origin of success. People are usually delighted when achieving success. But they may feel sad and discouraged when facing failure. This seems to be usual. However, in my opinion, only when we treat failure as good experiences can we make a difference。
First of all, to my mind, sadness and disappointment are senses of weakness. A brave man should keep going on when running into difficulties or problems. For instance, Stephen Hawking was diagnosed with a serious disease only a few days after his 21 -year-old birthday. It (插入was) said that he would die in several months. Facing disability and death, he went on doing his research. As disabled (Disable as) he was, he used a wheel chair and a laptop to keep track of others. In the long run, he finished his book (A Brief History of Time). As we all known (know)， Dr. Hawking struggled against his fortune and get (got) success at last. We should always keep in mind that beating failure is to achieve success. The more failure you experience, the more you can learn。
As far as I am concerned, being confident is also essential to achieve success. Confidence to a man is (插入 what) gas to a car. If you are facing a great challenge, telling yourself “I can do that” is a significant way to inspire yourself. You’ll feel getting stronger insensibly. Trust yourself, thus you can conquer anything with an iron will。
Everyone is willing to achieve success, while the way (插入of) treating failure is a notable problem as well. Achieving success is not without’ risk. That means facing failure, you’d better regard failure as good gifts, or else you may not get over it. To sum up, you should beat the failure, then come (comes) the success. Don’t be frightened with failure！ Beat them, and you’ll win!
Attitudes towards Failure and Success
姓名 逮秋月 山东省章丘市章丘四中 学校 高二·7班班级 准考证号 321
It’s no exaggeration to compare our life stage to a battle field which is loaded with both failure and success. From cradle to grave, people from different levels of life, almost everyone has to experience different kinds of battles: the competitions between students, between businessmen, even between countries, etc. As a consequence, we will face not only success but also failure. From the point of my view, proper attitudes should be taken towards failure and success。
Most often, when we are successful we are happy. After all, competition means that one do (does) one’s utmost to reach for things which are wanted by others, blow that you are successful, it means that you are the winner. So to speak, everyone dreams of succeeding and it’s common to be happy if your dream comes into reality. However, just as an old saying goes: Pride goes before a fall. We mustn’t sink our self (ourselves) into the world of flowers and congratulations. Come down to earth, more things of the essence remained to be done yet. History abounds with the example of that. Qing Dynasty fell behind other countries on account of its ridiculous satisfaction. It closed its window to the world and no foreign trades were allowed. Finally, it was beaten by western countries。
Thus, we must be aware of the circumstances and can’t be too proud of ourselves. Meanwhile, as failure is unavoided (unavoidable) in our life, more attention should be paid to failure。
First and foremost, we must absorb lessons from our failure. One mustn’t fall in the same place twice. Just as a proverb goes: Fall in a pit gain in your wise (A fall into a pit, a gain is your wit). Besides, everyone makes mistakes. Someone has said that show me a man who never makes mistakes and I will show you a person with two heads. That is to say, it’s undeniable for one to make mistakes and failure is a piece of dish that everyone must taste, despite (although) you are reluctant to face it. As a result, positive attitude (attiutdes) should be taken towards failure. Failure is the mother of success. Only if you are aware of that, you will succeed in the end. As is known to all, Napolon (Napoleon) is considered as the greatest person in France. He had experienced numerous wars before he succeeded. I remember that he once said, “You can never find ‘ failure’ in my dictionary. “ Yes, he succeeded and he never regreted (regretted) for what he had done. Keep in mind that there is only one winner, but everyone should strive for it. Most often, the obstacle to success is not our failure, but is our fears. If you failed, cheer up, everthing (everything) will be OK。
All in all, no matter it is sunny or cloudy, as long as we take positive attitudes towards it, success will finally come. Confidence is the first step to success. Come on, we are the best。
Failure and Success
姓名 张伟 山东省潍坊市昌乐二中 学校 高二、31班级 准考证号 148
No one can avoid being influenced by failure and success. As far as I know, there are countless people, who enjoy a high level of reputation, suffering from a great deal of failure and success. Actually, the road of Life is twittered (littered) with boulders and pitted with holes. It seems the same that life is filled with failure and success, making it more and more colorful .Because of them, the life is a long wonderful word。
As (插入 the) saying goes that no cross, no crown, failure always wins respect of many great scientists, for it adds color to the dull routine of everyone’s life. For example, Madam Cuie (Madame Curie) suffered a large number of sufferings, achieving her goals. Eventually, she won the Nobel (插入Prize). Though it’s possible to measure the value of material goods in terms of money, it’s extremely difficult to estimate the true value of failure, for it maybe marks the prelude to a series of success。
Obviously, success is a shining star sought by a great many people. Some people hold a view that achieving one’s goals is the only success that matters. Frankly speaking, achieving one’s goals is just a personal success. Whether or not it is accepted by society depends on what the goals are and what the ways are. If your success is built on another’s suffering, it’s not only unacceptable, but also immoral. In the light of this statement, Making (making) a contribution to society is the best way to enjoy success, for your efforts and values are appreciated by society, so you will be successful in the eyes of the public。
In the final analysis, failure is connected to success, and they exert a great influence on us everyday. As a result, the more the failure we suffered, the more (greater) the success we gained. So, come on, everyone, let’s be greed of (greedy for) failure so that we can possess a colorful future filled with flowers!
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