第五届全国创新英语作文大赛优胜作文选登(3)
姓名 刘明珠 辽宁省抚顺市抚顺市第二中学 学校 高二、2班级 准考证号 79
As the saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success。” l think one of the most important lessons in our life is to learn how to get success from failure。
One who is in the flower of his youth must go through stages when he fails. Some people feel sad whereas others feel it (去掉) worthy. Attitude counts everything. It can change one in a matter of moments. We must believe failure is not an end but a means to an end. We should learn to get success from it。
Then we will find that failure is a beacon, illuminating one’s soul, lending brightness to one’s being and leading one to success. It is also an angel, bringing us all the quantities (qualities) we need to achieve success。
In short, nothing can hold back an active attitude and failure is the freshness of the deepest springs of life。
When we get low marks, we should do my (our) best to change the situation by virtue of thinking twice. When we aren’t eapable of achieving goals we must also develop our ability by gaining experience. That’s why the famous inventor, Tomas Edison, achieved success and was at the top of science mountains (at the peak of science and technology). He believed that a thousand mistakes are for one success。
In a word, we must give full play to our failure. Success is having the courage to get something without being defeated. May our homeland become more and more thriving with our ability to get success from failure develop。
Find a Way Out
姓名 段俊壵 江苏省苏州市江苏省外国语 学校 高二(9)班级 准考证号 272
On roads of life, everyone is chasing his dreams. Sometimes you’re ahead, sometimes you’re behind. You must be happy when you succeed and you may be sad when you fail. And I do believe as long as you have a strong will and hold on to the end, you’re sure to succeed。
Have you lever seen the epic movie The Lord of the Rings? It was a wonderful trilogy. And the journey of Frodo and his fellows impressed me. When given the task, Frodo was afraid. During the journey, he learned a lot from the wise wizard, Gandalf. And later, he suffered a lot more (去掉)， such as losing friends, getting run after by swordsmen and so on. But all these didn’t stop him because he had a strong will and he told himself again and again that he had to destroy the Ring. Although, in the end, he didn’t do it himself, I think he was still a hero。
And next (Another) my own meandering experience also shows so. When I was in junior middle school, my English was poor. Since I didn’t have any basic knowledge, I had to learn all these from scratch. It was difficult for me to hold on and I was once in total despair. Then I read a book, on which it says, and I quote, (which says,) “The race is long, and, in the end, it’s only with yourself。” It really cheered me up, and from then on, I made up my mind to learn English well. Several years passed, and now I’m sitting in this classroom, attending this exciting competition. It proved my success, didn’t it?
We often suffer setbacks in life. The question is how to find a way out. A strong will and perseverance will help you. And here is a wonderful lyrics for you to remember, “When the night is overcome, you may rise to find the sun. “
Failure and Success
姓名 褚 汉 安徽省蚌埠市铁中 学校 高二(4)班级 准考证号 367
In modern society, competitions are taken places (exist) everywhere, and increasingly make people feel nervous and anxious. People in every field are forced to face the failure and success. One of the NBA mottos says, “Go hard, or go home!” It seems that the distinction between failure and success has become the only destination of our life. However, in my point of view, failure or success is not that important。
200 years ago, Napolean, empiror of France, (Napoleon, the emperor of France,) was defeated in “Waterloo”， Which is now used to describe “a great failure”. No one dare say he is a loser. Instead, he was regarded as an eternal hero not only in France, but also in the world. There’s no denying that he is a powerful men, and he brought his totally new ideology of freedom and liberty to nearly the entire Europe. He sought the end of tyranny and dictatorship on the ancient land. He desired to built (build) up a civilized nation in Europe, even in the world. Tile three laws made by him enabled all the kings to fear and shiver, because the laws marked their days would soon come. What’s more important, his laws gave birth to the modem system of civil rights。
In common with him, Xiang Yu is a failure hero in China. Fail (Failed) as he is, he becomes an original hero in Chinese culture. He ended his life with a sad but romantic legend, which, for thousands of years, has been winning a nation’s respect and memory. And this changed an ancient principle that the winner is a king, the loser is a crown (the loser a bandit)。
U. S. president George W. Bush once said, “Before history was written in books, it is written in courage. “Truely (True) it is,(插入and) the legends of the heroes, from both (去掉) west and (to) east, have proved it. One should care about what he did, not the result will be (去掉). Everybody completes his own tasks and work, That is enough。
At this time last year, I was sitting in the same classroom and taking the same test. Unexpectedly, I got a (an) excellent result. And this year I came here again, not only want a result for the (a) second time, but a (an) experience for the (a) second time。
Because I strongly believe that life is not a destination, but a journey. So work like you don’t need money, love like you have never been hurt, dance like no one’s watching, and toke exam like there is no failure or success. (本句受汉语思维影响太大，建议改为： So enjoy the sense of achievement in work, not the pay; enjoy the sense of beauty in love, not the possible hurt; enjoy the sense of rhythm in dance, not the peculiar sight from others; enjoy the sense of excitement in exam, not the final result. )
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