第五届全国创新英语作文大赛优胜作文选登(6)
Failure and Success
姓名 王婷婷 山西省太原市太原外国语 学校 高405班级 准考证号 43
In one of Shakespeare’ s famous plays, Hamlet says: “To be or not to be, that is the question. “ Many of those who encounter (encountered) failure may cry, “Failure or success, that is the question. “ As a teenager, I want to say: “It is the attitude that we have towards failure and success that matters。”
We can take the well-known inventor Thomas Edison for an example. During his lifetime, Edison experienced numerous error (errors) and trials. When faced with failure again and again, he may have been desperated (desperate). Whereas, he would embark on experiments once again. The fruits were sweet. Edison beat failure and finally achieved success。
Another great man who has a wise attitude towards failure and success is Einstein. When he was in primary school, once the teacher asked the pupils to make little chairs with clay, little Einstein made an ugly chair which could not even stand and gave it to his teacher. The teacher scolded him and classmates taunted him. However, to everyone’s surprise, Einstein said proudly: “It is better than the one I made just now, so I am successful “ What a great comment it was! Nobody can accomplish success easily. Bitter as failure is, it is not a bad thing to meet with some difficulties on the way to success. Only when we counter (encounter) failure and learn to adjust the direction in which we make efforts can we move nearer to success。
On the contrary, if one gives up right (fight) after failure, he would surely achieve nothing. Success brings happiness undoubtedly, but failure offers a great chance as well. As long as we make full use of failure, there is plenty of treasure we can obtain. The sheer happiness will fade next to a tremendous chance。
With the discussion above, we may draw a conclusion that opportunities derive from failure and we should seize them to make huge achievement。
Failure and Success
姓名 王乾元 辽宁省沼阳市东北育才 学校 高0412班级 准考证号 40
Growing up is a complex process consisting of many factors, including failure and success. In most cases, people are sad and fragile when faced with the former and pleasant about the latter. However, as to the theme of failure and success, personally I am convinced that it is only the right attitude towards failure that can result in success。
Certainly no reason for my indication is more conspicuous than that a positive attitude enables us to triumph over failure. According to a surrey by New York Times, 20% of the millionaires in the U. S. attribute their success to failure experienced in early years. The overcoming of sadness shaped their personalities; the bitter tears and self-encouraging smiles toughened their minds; the remaining confidence after the shock of failure made them men。
Furthurmore (Furthermore)， taking a positive outlook on failure keeps us away from trouble. As we know the past decade saw a sharp increase in suicide commitment (committing). No matter it was because of an unsuccessful business, examination or relationship (what the reasons may bean unsuccessful business, examination or relationship)， the story was the same: it was the pessimistic attitude towards failure that led them to desperation. If we are able to smile in face of failure, we can easily keep away from the unwanted effects it might give rise to, and only in these circumstances can we continue on our way to seek for success。
Finally, the optimistic attitude towards failure assists us in concentrating heart and soul to reach our goals。
In conclusion, a positive attitude is what we need to make failure the gateway to success, because not only does such as attitude help us overcome failure, but also contributes in keeping us away from trouble and focus (focusing) on how to gain success. Therefar (Therefore)， please take an optimistic outlook on failure while exerting our outmost (utmost) to seek for success, and there will be no future save (saving) a brilliant one。
Success Will Finally Come
姓名 邢睿楠 山西省太原市太原外国语 学校 高二405班级 准考证号 116
As we walk along the paths of life, we enjoy, we grieve, tasting the sweet happiness of success, coming cross the bitter fatigue of failure. Glorious as success is (此句有逻辑错误，建议改成Success is so glorious that) every one desires to win. Nevertheless, as the proverb goes, “Nobody always wins. “
Nobody always wins. Then, should we abandon ourselves into despair when we fail? Should we feel drowning in the sea of losers facing the end of world? No! Absolutely no! Wake up, guys. Remember, failure is the mother of success。
Among the countless classic examples, I would like to take our distinguished scientist Madam Curie for instance. We all know, she is a woman (female) scientist born in Poland. Regardless of much resistance, she believed instantly that there was an unknown element and she named it radium. Due to the underprivileged techonoly (technology)， it was an extremely hard task for her. She failed, again, and again... But, she was so determined that she paid no attention to failure, for she knew that success would finally come. And, success finally came。
As Marx once remarked, “There’s no royal way to success, only those who do not already fatiguing climb along the path can finally gain from luminous summits。” After failure, success will finally come。
Moreover, we live in such a modem world that many things have already blurred the deviding (dividing) line of (between) failure and success. It is complex but sometimes true (插入that) failure and success are interdependent and inseparable。
It is fairly wellknown that Thomas Edison was a remarkable inventor, but less known that he could hardly invent anything in his cast old days. For him, success came so easily and early that he became an exaggerate (arrogant) when his hair became gray. No matter what others suggested or conceived, it was all nonsense to him. He was too proud of his splendid success. He cared nothing but hoped to invent something to glomour (glamorize) his success more legendarily. But, he ended his dreams in vain. A man always won, lost at last。
As it illustrates, success doesn’t flatter the famous or authority. And failure doesn’t always follow someone if he becomes painstaking。
So, penetrate the phenomenon to study the essence right now. For the one who has sheer willpower, failure is just phenomenon and success is truly the essence. Success will finally come。
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