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第六届全国创新英语作文大赛优胜作文选登(7)

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  Which Education Is Better, Formal or Informal?

  姓名  付  雅  山东省聊城市聊城一中 学校  高三·二班班级  准考证号  0075

  As we all know, higher education takes an important role in one person’s (one’s) life. It’s in direct connection with his or her career. Facing this fact, we get confused. Nowadays there are many kinds of higher education, but which one is better, formal one or in- formal one? Actually, if we compare the two kinds carefully, we’ll find the answer. First, it’s about the study fee. Some formal universities’ tuition are very high (expensive). However, some students still go there without thinking. Why? They know it deserve it (it is well-deserved). Some informal education asks for a lot of money. But the fee is not the symbol of teaching quality. Maybe sometimes it’s only a symbol of modern teaching tools and beautiful surroundings. That’s it (去掉) for some expensive informal education. Second, formal universities, especially the good ones are full of experienced teacher. There’s no doubt about their teaching. Obviously, this is it’s the biggest advantage over informal education. Third, dislike in the (unlike the students in) formal universities, some students having informal education don’t consider it serious, Instead, they make escaping classes formal (often skip classes). Bad effects naturally take place. On the other hand, just in result of the short-time classes of time, the students have more time to have colorful activities they like, and to make money for study. That’s just what the students in formal universities can’t do. As a result, they can only have less social abilities. Forth (Fourth), with the development of the country, more and more companies pay attention to which university the employee comes from. For the students from courses (去掉) evening classes, it’s a big problem, although it’s a little unequal (unfair). But we must face the life. Lift is full of unequal (unfair) elements。

  After the comparison, the answer seems clear. The formal university education is better in most aspects. As we often say, nothing is perfect. No matter what is the education we choose, there is only one aim-to make our career successful and bright our life. That’s the very thing that counts. Education only takes the role of (as) the bridge to success。

  Facing Educational Ways, You Say, I Say.。.

  姓名  任思佳  天津市实验中学  学校  高二13班级  准考证号  0102

  As is known to all, universities were always regarded as the first step for one to enter his lifetime profession. However, with the rapid progress of society, people’s concept began to change: except (besides) formal education in universities, informal evening class and correspondence courses have enjoyed popularity these years。

  Some traditional people around me are holding the former opinion, and they own their own reasons. Firstly, a diploma, and they own their own reasons. Firstly, a dimploma (diploma) of a formal university values much more (higher) pay when finding a job (建议去掉), through which we can live a more comfortable life, In adition (addition), after four years campus life, you will learn to get along well with Our (your) roommates and schoolmates, from which(whom) we could improve our emotional quotes (quotient). On the contrary, students in evening classes absolutely don’t spend much time with their classmates, which results in less association among each other. Moreover, university life is a good lesson (experience) that teaches us how to be a strong-minded, open-minded man. Once lose it, you can never experience a similar lesson during your adult years。

  However, Some of (去掉) people in society are holding an opposite opinion think (thinking) that evening classes and open universities can also develop one’s covered potential. On the one hand, there is a lack of basical (basic) technology in today’s China. Without having to go to university, those who learn technology also adapt themselves to the urgent need of the country. On the other hand, they always look on society as their best teacher. To experience varies (various) cases and deal with large amounts of people, will lead them to live a more practical life in the near future. In a contray (contrast), those university graduates seem to be a little bit weak in their sociability。

  As far as I an concerned, both university education and evening classes have its (theft) own advantages and disadvantages. I still remember Lincoln once said: “A success is one who chooses his life style all by himself. “ And I just want to present it to all of you when you choose your education. A suitable one is always the best。

  To be exactly (exact), however, a university will provide you more than you expected. For me, I will choose a university education. It will help us harvest not only knowledge, but also unique experience and feelings, which will become a mine for our whole lifetime, help (helping) us to live a life with our sky full of sunshine and rainbow。

  Different Chocolate, Different Ways of Education。

  姓名  李小玢  山东省济南市山东省实验中学  学校  05级21班级  准考证号  0226

  “Life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what you are going to get. “ This is a classic (插入 part) from the movie Forrest Gump, which suddenly occurred to me when I got this topic. So please grant me to explain my contention with different kinds of chocolate. There are three kinds of chocolate in the current market, white chocolate, black chocolate and milk chocolate. In my humble opinion, each represents a way (form) of education。

  White chocolate is called “chocolate without cocoa”, and it is honeyed and scrumptious, not a bit bitter. Formal university education is like the white chocolate. Receiving a formal education means having a bright new future, and those graduates’ lives will be as sweet as honey. It is true that a diploma granted by a formal university can impinge more on (bring more benefits to) a student’s future, but this kind of education doesn’t always mean a coign of (a secure) vantage. Some students who attend to (去掉) a formal university tend to be idle and lazy, and some even act like an Epicurean. That is the same with white chocolates--too much sugar and milk could also spoil its wonderful taste。

  Black Chocolate contains at least 35% of chocolate liquor, and taste much too hitter to most of us. But it has an endless aftertaste. It is the same with informal education. Students who failed in the college entrance exams tend to have a busy life. Most of them have to work while studying at a night school. This kind of life is bitter, but it may bring some cordial aftertaste to a student’s life, too. Sweat doesn’t always mean failure, to a degree, and it may mean the Blue Bird to their future. I have a neighbor whose father is a migrant, and he received a 7.5 in the ILETS while helping his dad with all the housework。

  So far, you may think that I an in favor of informal education, don’t you? To tell you the truth, what I like is the milk chocolate, a combination of these two chocolates. In my humble opinion, a perfect education should combine the advantages of the two kinds of education together as a whole, it should absorb the comfort of formal education and the deligence (diligence) of the informal education. In that way, students can enjoy a colorful life, while at the same time, they gain sweat and tears through practicing their skills. It is my contention that both of the education is useful, hut the combination of the two is more perfect. Because only in that way can we make our juveniles highereducated and more skilled。

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