MODEL TEST ONE

　　PartⅤ Writing

　　审题：本文是一篇记叙文。大学生活与考生息息相关。大学生活与高中生活截然不同，是学习生活的新的开始，特别是大学第一年，给人全新的感觉。在新的环境下，学生会有

新的体会和收获，并对未来做出自己的规划。

　　写作思路：第一段：大学第一年的生活标志着新的开始，学生更独立，自由的时间更多。

　　第二段：这一年的收获，学到了很多的知识，培养了独立安排学习和生活的能力。

　　第三段：今后三年继续认真学习，同时参加一些学生会活动，全面培养自己的能力。

　　My First Year at College

　　(1)What impressed me most in my first year at college are the (2)sharp differences between college life and middle school life. As a college student, I have to live thousands of miles away from my parents and take care of myself in a completely strange place. (3)Besides, I enjoy much more free time at my disposal and have begun a new chapter in my life.

　　(4-1)During the first year, I have learned to make good use of my spare time. (5-1)Firstly, I often went to the library and did a lot of reading. (6)As a result, I have gained much knowledge which I did not have time to acquire in middle school due to the pressure of numerous exams. (5-2)Secondly, I worked as a private teacher on Saturdays and earned some money to relieve some of the financial burden for my family. (5-3)In addition, I have made quite a lot of friends and we have learned a lot from each other.

　　(4-2)In the following three years, I will continue studying hard and gaining as much knowledge as possible. (7)On the other hand, I will join one of the student organizations and make my own contribution to the community. Of course, I will improve my practical abilities as well in this way.

　　(1)引导全文

　　(2)形容词修饰得当

　　(3)引出第二点不同

　　(4)过渡自然

　　(5)分项说明

　　(6)说明结果

　　(7)说明另一方面的内容

　　MODEL TEST TWO

　　PartⅤ Writing

　　审题：本文属于建议信。作为建议，需要说明内容以及理由。关于应聘，则要提醒朋友注意哪些要求以及应该做好何种准备。最后，向朋友表示良好祝愿。写信时，要注意段落之间的过渡要自然。

　　写作思路：第一段：建议朋友应聘翻译一职并说明原因。

　　第二段：说明应聘翻译的基本条件。

　　第三段：建议看一些翻译技巧方面的书籍，并扩大词汇量。

　　第四段：祝愿朋友应聘成功。

　　A Letter in Reply to a Friend

　　Dear friend,

　　(1)I’m writing this letter to advise you to apply for the position as English translator in our company. (2)To tell you the truth, we’re in urgent need of good translators and I’m sure you have a good chance to get this job.

　　(3)As for this position, there are some requirements as follows. (4-1)Firstly, a TEM-8 certificate is a must. (4-2)Secondly, you must be able to translate an English article of 2,500 words into Chinese within a day. (4-3)What’s more, your translation should be fluent and faithful to the original.

　　Since you will have to take a translation test, it is suggested that you should read some reference books on translation skills. (5)Besides, it is necessary for you to broaden your vocabulary, as you are not allowed to look up new words in the dictionary during the test.

　　I wish you success.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Huck

　　(1)开篇说明写信目的

　　(2)短语的使用

　　(3)过渡自然

　　(4)分项说明

　　(5)补充说明

　　MODEL TEST THREE

　　PartⅤ Writing

　　审题：本文是一篇议论文。首先列举出两种对立的观点，然后分别说明各自的理由，最后表达自己的观点。

　　写作思路：第一段：提出两种不同的观点——选择名高校与选择好专业。

　　第二段：说明各自的理由。

　　第三段：支持第二种观点：好的专业更重要，更能增长和发挥自己的能力。

　　Famous University or Better Major?

　　High school graduates have (1)different views about what kind of university they should go to. (2)Some students focus their attention on the universities that are very famous across the country. (3)Others show a preference for those that offer a good major.

　　Students holding the first view usually think that people tend to pay much attention to the reputation of your university. If you are from a famous university, they will think you are an excellent student. (4)However, holders of the second view will argue that one should choose a good major instead of a famous university. A good major will help you develop your ability and skills.

　　(5)As far as I am concerned, I’d like to give my support to the second view. (6)After all, it is your own ability and skills, not the fame of your university, that count most. So we should choose a good major and make efforts to achieve self-development. If we blindly cling to those famous universities, we may fail to develop our full potential and make a great contribution to our society.

　　(1)总括第一段，引出不同的观点

　　(2)说明第一种观点

　　(3)指出第二种观点

　　(4)转折

　　(5)过渡自然，陈述自己的观点

　　(6)短语的使用，强调了能力技巧的重要性

　　MODEL TEST FOUR

　　PartⅤ Writing

　　审题：本文是一篇议论文。文章介绍长假的好处以及可能的问题。最后谈谈自己如何过好长假。

　　写作思路：第一段：长假有利于学生查漏补缺，以及进行实践活动。

　　第二段：有些学生贪玩，浪费宝贵时间。

　　第三段：我要好好学习英语，并做家教。

　　Long Holidays

　　(1)Generally speaking, long holidays are good for us students. (2-1)On the one hand, we have a lot of time to study by ourselves and thus improve weaknesses and further develop strengths. (2-2)On the other hand, we can take part-time jobs and make ourselves better prepared for social life.

　　(3)But every coin has two sides. Some students fail to make good use of their time and they are addicted to various computer games. I am afraid that they are likely to ruin themselves in this way.

　　(4)As far as I am concerned, I will try to make the best use of my precious time. I will spend most of my holidays studying English for I am very poor at it. (5)In addition, I will take a part-time job as private teacher. By this means, I can earn some money and put my knowledge into practice as well.

　　(1)总领全文

　　(2)表述两方面的内容

　　(3)用转折连词进行过渡

　　(4)引出自己的情况

　　(5)补充说明

　　MODEL TEST FIVE

　　Part V Writing

　　审题：图表说明文。分析图表可知，十年间，我国城乡患病率没有什么变化，而就诊率有明显下降。造成这种趋势的原因，一是公费医疗被取消，二是医疗费用太昂贵。社会需要以进一步进行

　　写作思路：第一段：说明图表表明的变化：患病率变化不明显，就诊率明显下降。

　　第二段：分析变化的原因：公费医疗被取消以及医疗费用太昂贵。

　　第三段：说明变化对个人和社会的影响。

　　Changes in the Hospitalization Rate

　　(1)The above chart shows some changes in the recent three national health care surveys conducted in the past ten years. As we can see, there is no obvious change in terms of morbidity, (2)but the hospitalization rate is clearly on the decline.

　　(3)There are two main factors contributing to the decline of the hospitalization rate. (4-1)On the one hand, medical services at state expense have been cancelled and people have to pay the medical cost mainly on their own. (4-2)On the other hand, the cost of medical care is so high that many people cannot afford or refuse to go to hospital.

　　Considering the decline of hospitalization rate, it is certain that the government will further carry out the reforms in the health care industry (5)with a view to serving the people better. (6)As for individuals, more and more people are likely to practice self-medication in order to save money and time as well.

　　(1)紧密联系图表

　　(2)转折连词

　　(3)引出原因

　　(4)说明两方面内容

　　(5)短语表示目的

　　(6)引出对个人的影响

　　MODEL TEST SIX

　　PartⅤ Writing

　　审题：本文是一篇议论文。分别说明两种不同的观点，并指出其理由，最后表达自己的观点。

　　写作思路：第一段：提出第一种观点——好学生应该是主动学习型的，并说明其理由。

　　第二段：提出第二种观点——被动学习型也能出现好学生。

　　第三段：表达自己的观点——好学生应该要主动学习。

　　The Making of a Good Student

　　(1)It is commonly accepted that a good student should be an active learner. An active learner has a strong desire to learn new knowledge and prefers to make links with existing knowledge. (2)Thus it is no surprise that he can retain information and knowledge more effectively.

　　(3)However, others think that a passive learner is likely to be a good student. A passive learner receives information from a teacher in an unquestioning manner. He may work very hard and succeed in memorizing almost all that the teacher has said.

　　(4)As far as I am concerned, to be a good student is to be an active learner. (5-1)On the one hand, we should approach learning as thinking instead of remembering. We should try to be an independent thinker and understand what has been taught instead of merely memorizing everything. (5-2)On the other hand, it is necessary for us to put our knowledge into practice. We must be able to apply the information to various situations when appropriate. (6)In conclusion, only by active learning can we be good students.

　　(1)引出第一种观点

　　(2)句际过渡

　　(3)转折连词构成段落过渡

　　(4)引出自己的情况

　　(5)说明两方面内容

　　(6)总结全文

　　MODEL TEST SEVEN

　　Part Ⅴ Writing

　　审题：日程安排的致辞。本文先向外国学生致欢迎词，然后进行自我介绍。重点在于说明一天的日程安排。接着对学校做一些描述。最后是结束语。

　　写作思路：第一段：欢迎外国学生的到来。

　　第二段：详细说明日程安排。

　　第三段：介绍学校。

　　第四段：结束语。

　　A Brief Introduction to My University

　　Dear friends,

　　(1)Welcome to our university. (2)To begin with, I am Huck, a member of the students’ union of the university. It is my pleasure to show you around the campus.

　　(3)Now to share the schedule with you, we will set out at half past nine. According to the schedule, we will visit the library, the gym and the canteen first. (4)In addition, we will have a free lunch in the canteen. In the afternoon, we will attend the English corner, where you will meet a lot of students and exchange ideas with each other.

　　(5)As some of you may know, our university is one of the best known all over the country. There are 21 departments in our university, with more than 3,000 students and 150 teachers. I am sure that you will have a nice day here.

　　Thank you very much for your attention.

　　(1)表示欢迎

　　(2)引起下文

　　(3)过渡自然

　　(4)补充说明

　　(5)引出下文

　　MODEL TEST EIGHT

　　PartⅤ Writing

　　审题：议论文。本文是对社会现象进行分析，然后提出自己的观点。首先举出打折这一现象，然后分析人们对此兴趣减少的缘由，最后得出结论，高质量和良好的售后服务才能真正吸引顾客。

　　写作思路：第一段：商家通过打折吸引顾客。

　　第二段：人们对打折的兴趣减少。

　　第三段：高质量和良好的售后服务是关键。

　　How to Really Interest Customers

　　Various businessmen provide discounts (1)in order to attract more customers. Low price is quite appealing to those who are short of money or want to save money. In fact, this strategy has brought in a great number of customers for the businessmen over the past decades.

　　(2)However, this strategy has been losing its effect in recent years. Price no longer functions as a determinant factor in the choice of most people. They are (3)increasingly aware of the importance of the quality of the goods.

　　(4)In my opinion, there are two main ways to really attract customers. (5-1)On the one hand, the businessman must make full efforts to improve the quality of their products. (5-2)On the other hand, good after-sales services must be provided to meet customer needs. (6)Only by doing so can a businessman really interest more and more customers.

　　(1)表示目的

　　(2)转折连词构成段落过渡

　　(3)表示“越来越”

　　(4)引出自己的观点

　　(5)说明两方面内容

　　(6)总结全文

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