原题回放:
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件,告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营,希望他一起参加。邮件内容包括:
1、介绍训练营相关内容(例如:时间、地点、参加者等);
2、说明你打算参加的原因;
3、询问对方的意象。
提示词:dragonboat training camp 龙舟训练营
点评:书信作文一出,相信大家脑中应该会立刻浮现出“书信三段论”:
首段四大万能句……
中间段T-E结构……
结尾段六大常见套话……
范文:
Dear Jim,
How are youdoing? (书信开头必问候)Recently, I plan to take part in a dragon boat training camp inorder to cultivate my interests, broaden my horizons and enrich my afterschoollife. (写信背景+万能利弊)Will you come with me? (写信目的)
Here are somedetails about this camp. (常用主题句)To begin with, it will be held in my school next Sunday. (简单句)Besides,100 middle school students from 7 countries will take part in this camp; as aresult, we will have the chance to have a good communication. (简单句+白银裤衩)
There are twomain reasons why I want to try it. (常用主题句)On the onehand, the dragon boat is an important Chinese tradition, which will be not onlymeaningful but also interesting. (白银裤衩句型+万能利弊)On the other hand, not only our ability but also our interpersonalrelationship can be improved. (万能利弊)
Hopefully, youcould join me in this camp. I have the confidence that we will have a greattime there. Please drop me a line to let me know your decision soon. I’mlooking forward to your reply. (六大万能结尾句)
Yours,
LiHua
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