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考研英语40篇大作文演练与点评第4篇
4 Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the drawing,
2. interpret its meaning, and
3. make your comment.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
该文分为三段。第一段描述图画。第二段分析该现象产生的原因。第三段谈该问题的解决办法。In the picture we see a pair of uneven parallel bars. On the high bar there is a word “admission”, and on the low one there is a word “graduation”. Obviously, the drawer wants to draw our attention to a serious problem in higher education.
In quite a number of universities and colleges, it is difficult for students to be enlisted—their college entrance examination scores must reach a certain level. But once they become undergraduate students, things totally change in many cases. On the one hand, the authorities have never really established a comprehensive system of quality control. If a student loses interest in study, chances may be that someone will know but no one will care. On the other hand, many teachers have never put the shaping of personality in a place just as important as the teaching of knowledge. When more and more students flood into the classroom, many of them have to abandon the interactive mode and turn back to the traditional mode of cramming. In the end, most students will graduate without too much difficulty as the school does not want to lose face in society.
To reverse this unfavorable trend, we have to take strong measures to reform the higher educational system. Educational resources permitting, we can even loose the recruitment standard a little bit. What is important is the quality of the “end product”—if we ever want to create more worldfamous universities, we should put emphasis on the development of skills and molding of character ever since the beginning. Only in this way can the university resume its function of cultivating talents and regain the respect that has been nearly lost. 第一段首句与次句描述了图画，第三句将图画中隐含的问题定位为高等教育中的严重问题。
第二段谈论了该问题形成的过程，相当细致。前两句先说学生进入高校相当难，需要高考分数达到标准，但入校后情况就不同了。而后分两方面谈：一方面校方未建立质量控制系统；另一方面教师未把人格塑造放在重要位置。学生人数暴涨后，教师们又不得不回到填鸭的传统模式。
第三段首句是段落的主题句——要解决问题，我们必须改革高等教育体系。第二句讲如果教育资源允许，甚至可以将入学门槛稍稍降低。第三句讲的是应从一开始就强调培养技能和塑造个性的重要性。最后一句是以倒装句作结。教育问题一直与社会现象、人生哲理一起构成大作文的三大类，近年来各大类的界限有时也不再泾渭分明。大家都有多年在校学习的经历，只有尝试从自己和他人成功和失败的体验中总结出教育的深层次规律，才能把握好这类题目。如本题中的“严进宽出”的现象实际上不是科学的教育方式，如果平时思考过这样的问题，写作时的成功率就会大大提高了。
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