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考研英语40篇大作文演练与点评第13篇

http://www.sina.com.cn   2008年12月12日 16:35   恩波教育

  13 Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should:

  1. describe the picture;

  2. interpret the meaning of the picture;

  3. make your comment.

  You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

  文章可以分四段来写:第一段描述图画,第二段解释产生该现象的原因,第三段讲应对问题的策略,最后一段作总结。In the picture, a crab is most surprised when looking at a man walking forward.

  It is not quite a challenging task for us to explain this phenomenon. To begin with, it is natural for different individuals to adopt different angles to look at the world and employ different methods to cope with problems, so we will find others opinions and behaviors hard to understand if we always look from our own perspective. Furthermore, to look down upon others or gossip about others private affairs can be largely attributed to selfconceit. When we judge ourselves, we think of what we can do; but when we judge others, we think of what they have done. So it is likely for us to overestimate our own ability, and feel the impulse to complain and condemn in the name of truth and justice.

  To solve this problem, the first step is to learn to control our own temper when facing again such “annoying” ideas or behaviors. When we calm down and analyze in depth what has happened, we are more likely to draw the reasonable conclusion. The next suggestion is to try to be strict with ourselves and tolerant of others at the same time—only in this way will it be possible for us to come to terms with the world. Another important point is that we should constantly develop and improve ourselves—when we endeavor to assimilate knowledge and accumulate experience, we will find it easier to have a calm mind and look at the world from a more balanced perspective.

  How can a crab refrain from laughing at a man walking forward when it has run amuck for so many years? We are intelligent beings who should make constant progress by learning, reflection and communication. When we get to the top of the academic, corporate, or social ladder, it is more important for us to stand higher and higher and look down on the earthly affairs without easily expressing our opinions.第一段是对图画的描述,非常简洁。第二段共六句话,阐释现象,在统领句后分两点来说。第一点说不同的人在看待世界和解决问题时采用不同的角度和方法是相当自然的,所以当我们从自己的角度出发时就会发现别人的观点和行为难以理解。第二点说藐视别人和闲聊别人的私事多是由于自负。当我们评价自己时,想的是我们能做成什么;而评价别人时,想的是他们已经做了什么。这样做我们就容易高估自己的能力,而产生了以真理与正义之名来抱怨与责备的冲动。

  第三段说解决问题的办法,分三点来说。第一点是说我们应学会控制自己的脾气。当我们静下心来深入分析的时候,我们便更有可能得出合理的结论。第二点是说我们应严格要求自己而非他人——只有这样我们才可能与我们所生活的世界达成妥协。第三点是说我们应不断提升自己——当我们努力吸收知识和积累经验时,我们将会更容易保持平和的心态,以更平衡的视角来看待这个世界。

  最后一段是结语——如果前面写得中规中矩,这一段可以使用一些特殊的手段来对文章的档次做大幅的提升。该段共分三句。第一句是一个反问句,呼应文章的第一段:螃蟹横行霸道多年,又怎么会不嘲笑直着走的人呢?该句的作用在于经过讨论之后,让读者产生巨大的共鸣——这一问题已非常清楚了。第二句说我们人是有智慧的,应当通过学习、思考和交流不断取得进步。最后一句说当我们攀上学习、公司和社会阶梯之巅时,我们应站得更高,俯看世事,而不轻下结论。这句话是对第三段第三点的直接呼应。后两句话中均有平行结构的用法,请用心体会。 越是看似简单的道理,大家越是应该谈深谈透。

  在一个段落里,分点写作的时候,大家应遵循一定的顺序来写,如在重要性上逐步增加等等。读者在文章的结构上遇到的麻烦越少,就越容易聚焦于文章的内容。另外,上下文的呼应会给读者带来潜意识的愉悦,是提高成绩的好方法。

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