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考研英语40篇大作文演练与点评第9篇
9 Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the drawing,
2. interpret its meaning, and
3. make your comment.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
该文可分三段来写。第一段描述图画。第二段分析了该现象产生的原因。第三段谈了解决问题的办法。这种结构安排相当常见。In the picture presented to us, a mobile phone, drowned in piles and piles of garbage messages, is crying for help. It is more than clear that the drawer wishes every one of us to pay more attention to this increasingly serious social problem.
First of all, with the number of mobile phone owners soaring, more and more people, especially merchants, consider sending messages as a quick and convenient way to capture potential customers. In the second place, with the development of modern technology, sending a message to a large group of people has become easy to nonprofessionals with the help of a small machine. Thirdly, the discrepancy between gains and losses has become so great. It is not easy to find the sender as he may be in a faraway place or even in a foreign country. Even if we catch him, the punishment is often negligible as it is difficult for us to prove that serious consequences have been brought out. On the contrary, if one percent of the receivers buy the products or accept the service, the sender will reap great profits. It is more than worrying for us to find that some senders actually have connections with the service providers.
In my belief, the elimination of this annoying problem is certainly difficult but not impossible. To begin with, the service providers should first regulate themselves to create a clean environment and then improve the technology to find out those senders instantly. Moreover, receivers of such messages should join in the effort by reporting quickly to the authorities. Third, we should establish related laws and regulations as soon as possible—once such senders are caught, we should punish them as seriously as possible. Only in this way can we solve this problem and protect the rights of common users.第一段首句描述图画，第二句是个过渡句。前面的描述如果只有一句话，这里使用过渡句的概率就较高。同时如果这里没有过渡句，第二句开始的统领句就不可缺少。
第二段分三点来讲垃圾短信产生的原因。首先短信是捕获潜在客户的快捷办法。其次，大量发送已非难事。第三，得失的差距太大。发送人不易被找到；即使找到发送者，通常处罚也很轻。但是即使只有1%的人购买产品或接受服务，发送信息者都会获得丰厚利润。
第三段的首句是该段的统领句。先讲了运营商的自律。而后讲了收信人应及时举报。最后讲了立法的重要性。最后一句是结语。大作文的写作正处在由社会现象到人生哲理转变的阶段，大家既要熟悉各种社会热点问题，又要有一定的总结、提炼、升华的能力。为了做好这方面的准备，养成写作与思考的好习惯是非常有必要的。可以将所有自己能收集到的题目先简单分为教育问题、社会现象和人生哲理三大类，然后选取一部分进行范文的细读、深度的思考和模仿性写作，另一部分只进行构思和总体安排，后期可直接进行口练。坚持不懈，必有长足进步。
文中的话题是身边常发生的事件，如果进行过相关的思考，即使没有写过，也会在紧张的考试中占尽先机。如果平时养成了思考的习惯，即使没有想过这个问题，也会毫不慌乱，游刃有余。
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