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考研英语40篇大作文演练与点评第19篇
19 Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the drawing,
2. interpret its meaning, and
3. make your comment.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
该文可分四段来写。第一段描述图画。第二段对“卖书买书架”的行为进行定性。第三段将该行为类比到当前社会中一些年轻人的做法。最后一段是结语。The two pictures depict a dialogue between a father and a son. In the first picture, the son says: “Dad, this is a beautiful bookshelf, but there are no books on it.” In the second picture, the father replies: “I used to have a lot of books, but I sold all of them to buy this bookshelf.”
Nothing can be more ridiculous than selling books for the sake of buying a bookshelf. The function of a bookshelf is to store books—if there are no books, the bookshelf will lose its value.
The thoughtprovoking pictures make me think about many young people in todays society. They work day and night to get money and fame at the price of their own life. On the one hand, they do not care about their own family—they always refuse to communicate with other family members in the name of their work. On the other hand, they do not care about their own health—they burn the night oil to accomplish tasks and attend various banquets to establish and consolidate relationships. When they finally succeed in getting what they have been dreaming of, they have lost the most precious things in life—family life and health.
Isnt this process just like selling books to buy a bookshelf? When we lose our own life, whats the meaning of getting titles, houses and money? To understand the true meaning of happiness, we dont have to wait until we have lost everything. 第一段对两幅图画中父子的对话进行了描述。
第二段的首句对上述行为定性——没有什么比这样做更可笑了。没有了书，书架也就失去了存在的价值。
第三段首句的拓展性很强，作用是将上述行为和当前社会的一个群体作类比。而后讲这些年轻人为了声名和财富牺牲家庭生活和健康。
末段首句又将第三段所述做法联系到图画，与前面的呼应性很强。而后说失去了自己的生活，头衔、房子和钱还有什么意义呢？这句再次呼应了上一段。最后一句哲理性很强，发人深省。要想写好大作文，掌握类比的能力是很重要的。图画一般是用简洁的笔触揭示深刻的道理，所以有时比较极端、比较凝练、比较有代表性。有时它直接反映某个社会现象，有时它需要我们去找出或建立某种图画与现实生活的联系——后者一般较难，但是比较有意义。实际上我们所做的与孟子正好相反——他是要找到极端的例子来证明当时君王或平民错误的做法，所以他的难度更大。
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