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考研英语40篇大作文演练与点评第22篇
22 Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the drawing,
2. interpret its meaning, and
3. make your comment.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
该文可分为三段来写。第一段描述图画。第二段从孩子和家长两方面来描述图画中所展示的现象。第三段仍然从家长与孩子方面谈这个问题的解决办法。In the picture, we can see that the parents are filling in the college application forms while the child is indulged in playing computer games. This phenomenon, often seen in todays families, deserves the attention from all of us.
This worrying phenomenon can be analyzed from two sides. On the one hand, the child, probably reaching the age of an adult, has never learned independence through all those years of education. He is completely absorbed in the game—it seems as if he never cared about his own future. On the other hand, the parents seem to enjoy getting everything ready for their child. Once in a while the child may raise a different suggestion, and they will try their best to persuade the child to accept their choice.
If we ever wish to find a sound solution for this problem, the joint efforts of the parents and the child are needed. On the one hand, the parents should create a relaxed environment for the child—they should employ various methods to help the child learn independence from a very young age. It is natural for parents to try to protect the child from pain and potential hazards, but how could the child grow up if he never met failure? The parents exclusive control over their child actually decreases the childs chance to explore and enjoy the full range of human experiences. On the other hand, the child should bear a great aim in mind as early as possible. After learning attentively, thinking hard and practicing actively, it will be nearly certain for the child to develop strong interest in a certain field. If he chooses what he is really interested in, he will be happiest college student who is nearest to his dream.第一段对图画进行了描述。第二段的首句是统领句，引起下面两个方面的阐述。第二、三句谈的是孩子没有学会独立，对自己的未来毫不关心。第四、五句写的是父母。他们似乎乐于为孩子准备好一切。偶尔孩子有不同意见，他们也会说服孩子接受他们的选择。
第三段第一句说要解决这一问题，需要家长和孩子共同努力。然后从家长和孩子两个方面分别来讨论应该如何去做。在读图构思的阶段我们应当考虑一下文章的层次感。比如这篇文章，谈的就是父母和孩子两种截然不同的行为。从这个角度出发，可以非常均衡地构造文章的第二段和第三段。这样读者在理解结构上所花的时间就最少，注意力可以集中在语言和说理上。如果语言精彩，说理充分，文章就能获得成功。
第三段的首句既把本段为方法段的性质确定了下来，又确定了本段的结构。当时间紧迫的时候，我们可以采用这种复合功能句。如果时间充裕，我们能够在语言上做一些微调，就更完美了。
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