2013年上半年的六级考试已结束,以下是对六级写作的思路指导及范文,希望即将参加英语六级考试的同学能以此为借鉴,运用到自己的写作当中,举一反三。
Directions: For this part, you areallowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Goodhabits result from resisting temptation”. You may cite someexamples support you view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than200 words。
难度:
谚语本身的难度大于上一个题目,resist和temptation两个词对部分学生有一定难度,但其实都是四六级词汇啊!!
思路:
第一段:开篇引用+深意(这里直接写深意就可以了:生活中充满了各种诱惑,抵御诱惑才能养成好习惯或者我们应该学会抵御诱惑)
第二段:正能量(抵御诱惑的益处,比如:让我们能专心致志去做更有意义的事情等)+举例(必须要举例!题目要求了。)
第三段:再次强调抵御诱惑对于培养好习惯很重要+我们自己具体应该怎么做
范文:
Good habits,so the proverb has it, result from resisting temptation. Or, to put it anotherway, in a dazzling world of myriad temptations,onecan foster good habits only if his excessive desire is controlled and thetemptation is resisted。
It is easy forthose who fail to resist temptation to go astray or get into bad habits underthe influence of evil companies. A recent survey reveals that teens smoke, takedrugs, and ride with drunk drivers not because they haven't thought about therisks, but because they are tempted by their peers to try new things. By contrast,those who succeed in resisting temptation can always devote themselves to moremeaningful things. Take college students for example. Only if we resist thetemptation of playing computer games or other meaningless entertainments can weform such good habits as reading, keeping good hours, to name just a few。
In short, infostering good habits, nothing can be more important than resisting temptation.Hence, it is essential that schools,educatorsand parents combine efforts to cultivate young people’s ability of tellingright from wrong as well as guide them in fostering correct views on life andvalues. Only in this way can good habits be formed。
(长沙新东方 高杰)