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考研英语40篇大作文演练与点评第35篇
35 Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the picture;
2. interpret the meaning of the picture;
3. make your comment.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
这篇文章可分为四段来写。第一段是描述图画,第二段和第三段是对现象的解释和评述。第四段是结语。The picture demonstrates three winners of a game on the platform: the runnerup is obviously unhappy about the result and thinks that he might have beaten the opponent and be the final champion with a little bit more luck, but the bronze medalist is quite content with the result and believes that he might not have a place on the presentation stage at all.
This drawing sets me thinking for a long time—it so vividly reflects the subtle changes of human beings under a particular situation. Every athlete wants to have an excellent performance in an important game, but the final result is determined by the combination of various factors. Compared with the final award, the more important element may be our attitude toward the game and life as a whole.
When a person decides to be a professional player and devote himself to his beloved sport, is it possible for him to look beyond game results and at something more significant and more beautiful? Not everybody can be the champion, but everybody has the chance to demonstrate the confidence to be swifter, higher, stronger and the determination to conquer difficulties, surpass himself and hold on to the top.
On the life road, many happenings also follow the same principle. To have a good job and a harmonious family is admirable, but what is of vital importance is the demonstration of human virtues including bravery, responsibility and perseverance. 第一段是对图画的描述。
第二段分三句说。第一句说该图让我深思良久——它生动地反映了人在特定情形下的微妙变化。的确，图画的场景选择非常精妙，且包含了对比的特征。第二句说每个运动员都想在重要比赛中取得优异成绩，但是最终结果是由多种因素决定的。第三句说与最终的奖项相比，对待比赛与人生的态度更重要。
第三段分为两句话。第一句说当一个人决定成为职业选手而献身所热爱的体育运动时，他可以超越分数，看到更重要更美丽的东西吗？第二句说，不是每个人都能获得成功，但每一个人都会有机会展示更快、更高、更强的信心和战胜困难、超越自我、坚持不懈的决心。
第四段分两句讲。首先讲在人生的道路上，许多事情的道理是相同的。第二句讲，在人生道路上，拥有好工作与和谐家庭值得羡慕，但至关重要的是展示人类的勇敢、责任与毅力等优点。文章第二段与第三段意思层递，第四段也直接呼应了第三段，这种层层推进的方式请大家借鉴。
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