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考研英语40篇大作文演练与点评第29篇
29 Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the drawing,
2. interpret its meaning, and
3. make your comment.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
年份1999200020012002我国城镇登记失业人数(万人)575595681770我国城镇登记失业率(%)3.13.13.64.0该文可分三段来写。第一段描述图画。第二段分析该现象产生的原因。第三段谈该现象的现状。In the picture, we can see that the old man, with a stick in one hand, although sweating heavily and breathing hard, can hardly keep up with the young man who is looking back with a smile on his face while darting forward. The old man signals “low income” and the young man represents “high housing price”.
Three reasons, in my belief, can account for this phenomenon. First and foremost, with the deepening of reform and acceleration of urbanization, more and more people want to settle in big cities and buying an apartment is the best way to merge into the local community. Furthermore, more and more local and foreign investors flood into the housing market, pushing the already soaring price to an even higher level. Last but by no means the least, in many cases Chinese people often can not gain the sense of security completely until they have owned their own apartment—they will save every penny just to fulfill this lifelong dream.
We are happy to see that the problem has become not so serious up until this moment. The chief reason is that the government has issued the policy to limit the investment in the second apartment and build up more apartments for lowincome families. I personally believe that more and more people can change their traditional mode of thinking—they can rent an apartment, which is much less expensive. In this case, they can improve their living quality and thus live a better life.第一段首句描述图画，第二句讲明老人与年轻人分别表示什么。
第二段分三点来讲该现象产生的原因。首先随着改革的深化和城市化的加速，越来越多的人把买房作为融入当地社区的手段。其次国内外投资人蜂拥入市，将居高的房价进一步推高。第三，中国人的“没有家就没有安全感”的传统观念挥之不去，所以省吃俭用也要买房。
第三段首先讲该现象已不那么严重了,原因是政府出台政策的结果。然后提出个人建议，更多人可以选择租房。 对于社会现象，许多同学有一个疑惑：如果我的分析不够全面、深入怎么办？其实大家只要尽力而为就可以了。特别是对社会争议很大的问题，大家进行认真的思考与推理，得出自己的结论，即使可能不完善、不专业，也是值得赞扬的。一方面，阅卷老师更重视语言；另一方面，只要行文能自圆其说，不出现巨大错误，就不会因此而失分。
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